me and maybe lame poetry!!

ok well i just got interested in poetry and i wanted to post it ima post a few and tell me wat you guys think?
Have you ever stopped and thought how many times it takes to say sorry so the other person can finally forget?
Well thanks to me i finally found the anser infinity! maybe more if thats possible..

How many tries did it take to finally launch a rocket out into space?........
yeah thats how many tries it takes for a person to apologize perfectly!

Hurting people and then having a guilty dirty concious is nothing like being hurt and trying to move on with life and still having to to remember, so dont go around hurting people because although you both end up hurt in a way its nothing compared to being on the other side?

They are all amazing! Don't forget to break the lines up. I honestly say you are a much better poet lauret then me. (not lying)

AAAaawww!!!!!! tnx n yeah ill do tat.......

mRs.PCipriano wrote:AAAaawww!!!!!! tnx n yeah ill do tat.......

your very welcome my sweet!

oo heres another one it was inspired by my aunt
New definition of WORRIOR
How come evrytime You or some one else says the word WORRIOR You think of a guy and not a girl?
I met a woman that forever changed my mind.
I saw her recent pat and I'm seeing her present.
She isn't fighting just for herself she's fighting for evryone she loves.
To me she seems like a real WORRIOR no matter what anyone thinks!
What do you think??

OMG! That is beautiful! I absoutly love it! You don't mind if I show to my mom? It is really great. I mean it.

sure its fine with me.... -shrugs- oo this one u inspired.....
oo n ima do it in yellow since u LOVE yelloe
How come people judge us by our outside and never our inside?
How come people never bother to dig deeper>
How come they feel satisfied with just seeing the outside?
It sometimes hurts to be judge by our appearance and not our heart and soul! hope u like it big sissy!!!!!!!!!

I actually really do love it. Why can't people judge us by our inside? Wish it would happen.
-a tear trickles down my cheek-
it's gorgeous!I

aww!!!!!! i wrote it so u would b happy no so u would cry!!! any who ur just crying frm happiness so umm idk wat i should say........

-smiles-
i am crying out off happiness. You don't need to say anything. You said enough beautiful stuff.

AAAAWWWWW!!!!!! but wat happened to my encore?!?!?! -pouts-

-smiles- no worries!
-claps- encore! Encore!

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!
How come people make us believe "the one" can be rite around corner?
Or can even b someone you know?
Cuz seroiusly i know the ppl tat leave on both corners of my block n everyone i literally know aint gonna be it.......


ive stiched my heart more times tha i can count
i thought "the one" came when the time was rite
i think i have waited to long n my time passed by
i wonder who and when my one will come......

oo cuz i luv tag!!!!!!
How come people get judged if we play "kids" games?
I believe maybe because they never tried to be young
In a while or so they will regret this time
and wish to be young again


To night they walk
To night the wish to be
To be with each other
But to night they can't
For they were they were dammned
To never be have a night together
But tonight they maybe ditch that and finally
To night will be their night

ooo i came up with this one JUST right now!! YAY!! 4 me!!!
What happened to never looking back?
What happened to staying in the present?
You did no good in your promise because you judged me because of what i "DID" and 2 me thats the past right?
Forever
forever they seek for each other
Forever they find each other
Time after time they encounter themselve
Forever they believe they're not the one
But a forever day comes by and they accidently touch
Forever they know they were ment to be

HA!!!!!!!!!!!1 me n some guy were sharing poems n this is wat he responded to my tag poem

It is not regret that fuels their judgment,
but rather jealousy of their age,
They wonder where their childhood went,
And why they have been locked in an elderly cage.
Wanting to be free and play tag too,
they mock us because they want to join me and you.

kool huh??? heres another one i wrote

no matter how much i try the sting is there
theres no use of hiding this
how do you run from a pain that is in your chest
if only "he" were here
it maybe ease the pain

Wow they are all very amazing! -claps-
my favorite is the tag. I feel exactly like that. Love it sweet keep doing more.

ok!!!!!! drag twin into this HA know she like poetry to!! yay!

to night the moon and the stars try to shine
but the night is still dark
the longer i stay out
the more it gets draker
and the more it drives me into
the darkness tat u left me in

mRs.PCipriano wrote:ok!!!!!! drag twin into this HA know she like poetry to!! yay!

to night the moon and the stars try to shine
but the night is still dark
the longer i stay out
the more it gets draker
and the more it drives me into
the darkness tat u left me in

haha! Twin's darkness? Very cute.

HEEHEE!!! tnx! when r u going 2 england??????

what happened to the sun
to lovely birds that fly around
being as happy as can be
what happened to the moon shining big and bright as can be
to the beutiful starts that shine next to the moon
I haven't seen any of this since that day you left me
alone in a space were nothing is bright
and nothing can shine
Please come back for that Life is nothing
without its light

ok i dont like this one cuz i didnt get to write it i got off the top of my head.....

for what is life if you aren't here
all i see is people living
living as happy as they can be
but all i do is stand right there
and see happy people pass by
mocking me with their smiles and laughs
when will i ever be happy
when will i ever live again?

mRs.PCipriano wrote:HEEHEE!!! tnx! when r u going 2 england??????

next Sunday. I thought it was today. But I was wrong. Oh well.

oooo have u told "STARK"??? or u want me 2 tell him?????

mRs.PCipriano wrote:oooo have u told "STARK"??? or u want me 2 tell him?????

you tell him. Since I can only get on the website on weekends.

ooo ok!!!!!

if only we could choose they way we wanted life
if only going thru things were so easy
if only love came when we closed our eyes any willed it to come
i probablly wouldn't be writting this.......

people say "enjoy life will you have it"
i wonder if its true
but the problem is theres rules to live by
so why do people say to enjoy
if what you want to do may noy be allowed
but guess we'll just have to go thru
"move on thru life"

my life was so dull and safe
that all i had to do for fun was watch tv
but ever since you came along
my life is filled with excitement and danger